Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, October 24, 2018
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thats a good biteable but you made a little mistake at the end you said I hope enjoyed but your supposed to say I hope you enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteKIA Ora,Riley i liked the way you added music to the video. liked your video but you said i hope enjoyed but you should say i hoped you enjoyed
ReplyDeletegood gob Riley
ReplyDeleteI like the way you Presentated it in a biteable.The fatcs that you ues my favouret was the 4th slied.Next time you could add more slieds.
ReplyDeletehi Riley it is meh Sophia and i really like your video so well done 😜
ReplyDeleteHi Riley, this bitable is so great, I liked the part where you said you might came tumbling down then the tower came tumbling down, there was one mistake where you said stay safe smart. Was that what you where meant to say?
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