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Tuesday, June 12, 2018

Stonehenge by Riley


The tall rocks are stacked on top of each other in the middle of nowhere with the birds tweeting in the wind, The wind was whistling against the rocks it was so calming, I could smell all of the freshly cut grass also there was a lot of dust on the rocks, Woosh a big breeze went past me like a jet. The reckless rough rocks stood in front of me, they look like 100 ft tall. The tourists were a stampede of wildebeest.                  


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1 comment:

  1. I like the how you put the picture in so we know how Stone henge looks like. I like how you put all the detail into you writing.

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