Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, May 15, 2019
My information report
This term we are doing information reports for our writing, this is my one hope you like it :)
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Riley. I liked your animal slide. You taught me lots of information about animals. Next time can you add more information into it?
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Hi Riley i liked the way you added lots of information and lots of pictures WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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