Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 8, 2020
My work for the week
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Riley, nice work! I love all of your 90 second artworks and that you tried something different for each one. They all look so cool! I love all the colours and the different ways of blending them. Great maths and literacy work too. What did you find the most challenging when working out the volume of each object? I love all the descriptive words you have used in your writing. Remember to read over your paragraph and check the length of your sentences. Have a great week! Caitlin :)
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