Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, September 3, 2020
big bad wolf
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Hi Riley I really like your wolf post and I like how you put the title big bad wolf but maybe next time you could make tghe writing not go off the page. But other then that I think it is really good
ReplyDeleteHey Riley, I like how you have used the specific vocabulary about Yellowstone- it is a shame that the writing has gone off the page. I completely agree with you, wolves are amazing for the biodiversity of an environment, they really are a super species- I wonder if there are any other creatures that have this effect on an environment...?
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